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Thursday 26 June 2014

Matariki Poem

The Seven Sisters Story
Once a year
Most men live in fear
when the seven stars align
for the millionth year
open ears for there sounds again
hoping not to fall under their spell this year.
oh my I dont mean to intrude
but I think that the sisters are being quite rude
because all they do is deceive us dudes
and parish us away till we become there fools.

But there are many things good about this day
for example all the kids laugh and play
because this one day was the day that they were banished away

while everyone rejoiced again.

4 comments:

  1. I like this poem Jerome, you add a real contemporary edge with your verse, and "deceive us dudes" line. you should keep writing poetry.
    Mrs Parker

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  2. What a great poem Jerome! The only sentences or word I really liked was when you said "they were banished away while everyone rejoiced again. I really enjoyed reading your poem~~~

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  3. cool poem Jerome I liked all your rhymes

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  4. good work Jerome i like your poem a lot

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